Blog 18:list some places that have been important in your life; if possible, go to one of them and write in your writing journal about what you see => use this writing to create a blog entry where you use description to make a point/reflect on a realization (like McPhee). Do not state your reflection directly.
Swing set
My dads house
the frront porch
my car
The shower
Where can you go to breathe?
Theres a place I know about where the world does not exsist. It is quiet, warm, and safe. This place can serve many purposes to different people, it can be taken for granted or just the opposite, be a blessing. For me this is my escape. Surrounded by three walls and a curtain I am
untouchable. When I am here my senses are at their highest levels. The aromas in the air mixed with the hot steam take me far away from the outside world. Sometimes I just close my eyes and stand there allowing my senses to run wild. I smell the carribbean and feel thousands of sensual pricks of heat all over my body. Then quickly i am swept away to another location, I hear the sounds of a rain storm on a hot summer night and I wish i could stay. To ensure that nothing can interupt my moments of serenity i keep my eyes closed tight, for seeing my surroundings would take me away from my liquid fantasy. Everyday I am able to leave my world for awhile, forget about lifes day to day stresses and emerse myself in the delights of something so simple. I myself would never be one of the individuals who does not enjoy the simple things in life, for in these moments I am in heaven. That is until I run out of hot water.
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Kelly - This is very sensuous. There is nothing like a hot shower, especially when you are not in a hurry. I love to take my time. Maureen
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