1. your proposed focus + the object, place, or person you will write about to develop that focus2. the specific descriptions or information you will present to develop your focus3. what each description shows about your focus4. a specific request for feedback
The object that I want to focus on is a picture of all of my siblings and I on vacation two years ago. It is very rare that the five of us are all together so having this picture in my room brings back lots and lots of memories that involve us all, some being good and some not. The focus that I am chosing to write about is siblings who have a different parent or parents are siblings no matter their title. Blood does not make us brothers and sisters.
First I plan on giving a decription of each of the five of us on the picture, connecting eachothers looks. Then connecting our feelings. From here I will talk about the picture and a few others moments in our lives that aided in getting is where we are today. If possible I would like to take a memory that i have shared with each of my siblings and after each memory come back to the picture of us all.
I would like to know if this is a good idea. I think my focus as usual is not complete and any feed back that may help me develope a strong focus would be great.
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